Friday, December 19, 2008

Love? Comments

Rating: 5.0

'What's love? ' she asks, and I reply:
'This strong, pure admiration
that I feel for you inside.'
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Robert Melliard
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Nia Riz 29 December 2008

oh...thanks a lot for asking me to read this poem...coz if you didnt...i would have missed it! ....a very good piece...my favourite lines were 'But when does it take place, and where? ' she wants to know. 'Each time I glance at you, ' I answer, 'and everywhere I look, from head to toe. any girl hearing that from a lover would get a shiver of pleasure all over her body and that feeling is beautiful! ! ! a very good poem...10+ for sure from me Nia

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Stephanie Fiddy 27 December 2008

very true! i love this poem i give it a 10! actually beyond a 10. If you had love you/ loves you she would not ask!

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