Friday, July 1, 2011

Love... Comments

Rating: 5.0

Breath…
a steady in and out
Beat…
a pounding in my veins
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Haley Akin
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The 4am Poet Worm 04 August 2011

absolutley exquisite... i loved this poem.... just like the language of love i understood it instantly... so much can be said, without using humongous words i have google to find the meaning of...

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 01 July 2011

Dear friend, you have defined love very well. Excellent write with a very strong structure. Great sentiments and incredible imagery. Voted 10. Thanks for sharing..... Kindly read and vote my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Regards Akmal

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