great poem, but I think it does not capture the multiple colours of love. that is the problem of oversimplification-emma oduro
Once you get past the pretty, you eventually get pricked... lol Short and sweet... Good job.
O.O god thats good. few wrods with a lot of meaning. not a lot of people can do that
Wow....i am blown away by your poetic style...so much in so little, but what do i know im 13
wow i am amazed of how you can say so much in so little words, i like you poetic style, but what do i know im 13
LOL, love is really like that, isn't it? I think it's more than a bush of thorns, though: /
I agree with Chukwuma. Saying so much with very few words. My perception is love can be found in great pain and only in a season of bloom. Rare.
Simple and true! I like the exclamation point. It adds force to the words. I think without it..the poem would read entirely different. Hope this not just me stating the obvious