Love
One our greatest emotions
Love
My one true weakness
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you are actually right at your lines about love-but i want to include the joy and smiles and bliss love brings. of course we all feel hurt at one time in our life, but love will always be a wonderful thing. nice poem here. ten points.
Lofty are your words, and impoverished are your follow-ups. I hope you keep it going.
I agree with Chris from FB, it has a very nice flow! Concerning Love, only time will let you know if it was really love or an obsession! A very well penned write where you freely speak your mind and heart! 10+++ Keep it up and thank you for sharing! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC....