Thursday, September 19, 2019

Love 18 - Love Deprived Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love - 16

It is when your silence starts to speak
That your love feels deprived
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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon
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Alyx True Edge 21 July 2024

Nothing to add, nothing to say. Sometimes silence is louder and more expressive than anything, well said

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Unnikrishnan E S 21 February 2022

Poet Dilip K Swain has posted a comment on this poem, but I am not able to find it on the page. My gratitude to the dear friend and noted poet.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 February 2022

A powerful poem expressed through a few words....appreciated. Brevity of expression is the hallmark of poetry! Top score.

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Rebecca Navarre 20 February 2022

Wow such a deeply moving words! .. Very powerfully written yet ever so heart touching! .. Beautifully expressed! .. Definite 5 Stars! ..+++++

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Nosheen Irfan 06 October 2019

Great depth in just two lines. Quite a marvel! A massive 10.

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Unnikrishnan E S 06 October 2019

It is common knowledge that Love needs no words to express itself. But once silence regains its voice, deficit in its expressiveness will be evident.

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Mahtab Bangalee 02 October 2019

o love please come come to forgive come to be united come to this super safety den of heart........! ! ! /

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Unnikrishnan E S 02 October 2019

Wow! Wonderful sequel to the couplet. Very happy to understand that you have captured the true spirit of the lines.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2019

I liked this poem. So brilliantly presented. It gives something to ponder about. A very short write with big impact. Onto my Poem List.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2019

Love in certain situations can be seen in silence yet words seem to be more dominant coupled with actions to show your love for a certain person. In cases troubled times occur, I think silence is more appropriate to consider to give way to calmness.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 26 September 2019

A poem of great depth. Powerful lines to convey the effect of silence on love. Sometimes silence can talk much, speaks louder than voice in certain circumstances. However, there are times when this is misinterpreted. It boils down still to how the person fully grasp the situation.

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Unnikrishnan E S 26 September 2019

Wow! I have been overwhelmed by your in-depth analysis of this couplet. As you would have noticed reading my poems, I choose always to stand close to life in my poems. This comes to me naturally, unconsciously. This is not a deliberate line of thought. Even in my poems based on epics, my interpretation of the story/situation have been close to life. I feel honoured that you have understood this fact very clearly.

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Ashika Murali Acharya 19 September 2019

Quite a powerful line!

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Unnikrishnan E S 20 September 2019

Thank you Ashika, for your appreciation of this poem. And it is wonderful to see you again on ph. Hope everything is going great with you. And, believe you celebrated Onam well. Wish you best of everything.

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Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

Unnikrishnan Sivasankara Menon

PUTHENCHIRA, KERALA, INDIA
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