When the lovely night embraces me in a deep sensous
pleasure
I watch the jasmine gets jealous green
she sheds a beautiful sensual fragrance around the thin air
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Hey Shamik...I really loved this poem...So beautifully you've tackled the notion of love...and in that way few facts about love have been unfathomed....
A very imaginative poem with rich imagery. As Jasmine does have such a beautiful fragrance and we have it growing, I could really visualize this poem. Well done! 10 Karin
‘…I watch the jasmine gets jealous green…’ Imagery candid and splendid…but poetic twist at end….melancholy and it is poetically profound.... Ms. Nivedita Ten+ UK