Love - 16
'Do you not love me anymore? ' She asked.
'Why? ' He was taken aback.
'I had added extra salt in the curry deliberately,
But you did not even shout at me' she said.
'Oh! I thought I'd be polite
To you for the day,
For it is your birthday today',
He felt relieved.
Very deep and passionate creation elegantly crafted with artistic brilliance. Your diction is a complete delight. Thanks for sharing, Unnikrishnan. Remain enriched.
A beautiful poem on love through conversation has been delineated by you touchingly, dear ES, in such a way that it is too interesting to read over and over again. A lovely poem on love..10
Thank you sir, for appreciating the subtle humour in human life.
Thank you sir. This is a little nonsense about love within marriage. Nice that you liked it.
Such an endearing little poem, Unni! I loved the conversation. A truth of life and love!
A trivial incident in every day life says a lot. How people react to situations reveals their psyche. A good comment on love and its imperfection n unpredictability.
Obliged to you, Nosheen. Your comment is analytical and brings out the true sense of the poem Thank you. Your words make my dear!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow lovely poem.. True love is loving someone in spite of thier imperfections and mistakes. +++10