Sunday, May 23, 2010

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Listen and feel my words

Understand me like you hear the birds
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Craig Mize
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Iris Rain 19 June 2010

Everybody know I never played but always won And I still lost in this game of life And that was my ultimate sacrifice Love. Such a great use of contrast. I like the strong statement and sentiment. Love, can be ironic and confusing, Another facet of love, expressed from the writer's point of view. Excellent write

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Gita Ashok 07 June 2010

Understand me like you hear the birds Feel me like you feel the wind Lovely.

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Craig Mize

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gainesville GA
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