Thursday, November 20, 2008

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there is no severity in a flattened iron casing that has become my heart
a robotic adaption made by me, where my glowing red eyes register the prize
of an engineer who can only save me, can only turn me back into a person
free me from these invisible bonds so I can once again stand on top of the clouds
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Kale Beaudry
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Chloe Young 07 July 2009

i love how unique this is for a love poem! unlike anything i've read and that's a god thing <3

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Susan Bagley 02 May 2009

a robotic adaptation made by me...... I like this a lot Kale. You are definitely an orgianl, no doubt about that! ! ! Susan

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Kale Beaudry 16 April 2009

Thank you Mel! I did my best to seperate myself from the million of other love poetry out there... compared myself to a robot with one goal in mind, capable of being cured only by an 'engineer'. - Kale

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 15 April 2009

u are so true.. this is a well written poem.. outstanding

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Kale Beaudry

Kale Beaudry

Vancouver, BC, Canada
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