Wednesday, October 8, 2008

Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

… Is, Pulling the blanket over me when im asleep
… Is, Painting my toe nails for when my back is sore
… Is, Coming and changing my light bulb because I cant reach
… Is Washing me when I cant get in the bath
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SharonAnn Dawson
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james Xane 08 October 2008

You've tried - and done great! I loved the use simple language, yet conveying so much. Your lines speak out minds of many believers. I loved it. Keep writing. :)

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Ency Bearis 08 October 2008

nice logic of love..well penned.. Ency Bearis

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