Love Everyone talks about how great
it is but yet when they get there
Heart Broken there no longer
in love, When you really in love you'd
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i actually liked the poem.it is heart felt one it touched my heart deeply.
I like your definition of love. But I wonder whether you mean, 'Your heart beats slow' by saying 'Your heart beasts slow'. I think it's a typographical error. Keep on writing in order to create masterpieces. Another 9.
a 10+ for ya lovely write! .......10+