Friday, November 14, 2008

Lovable Suicide Comments

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Falling from the highest point of the day,
Falling for the one I love so I can lay,
Lay in the dirt, where I belong
Laying there, singing one song
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Ina Davila
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Paul Barnacle 14 November 2008

Brilliant, that is perfect.A wonderful pain expressed.Carry those scars myself. Perfect poem.Thank you.P xx

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Ina Davila

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