Friday, December 18, 2009

Loudest In The Silence Comments

Rating: 5.0

He's back again
I can feel Him Breathing
Hear Him moving
no one else knows He's Here
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Juvela Obi
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Kesi Miwa 12 January 2010

ok misty-eyed lady... you must have some serious issues with perception. even without knowing there was anything literal about this poem, I could still figure out the author was trying to convey fear and pain. how do you bless a being of any kind that is clearly described as evil and takes pleasure in the pain and fear?

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masked lady 19 December 2009

Very nice poem! Its my first time to read a poem about ghost! The spirit here didn't rest in peace, what a pity. May he rest soon. GOD BLESS you ghost.

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