Lotus In My Heart Comments

My heart was a citadel and the Lotus was its idol, A storm of unknown Pain washed it away and the flower dropped into naught...; ; ;

Inside my heart a lotus flower bloomed at the dead of night and It dropped unheard. Pain was deep and innermost Joy could not hold it, ..; ; ;

Inside my heart a lotus flower bloomed at the dead of night and It dropped unheard.

lovely LOTUS LOVELY HEART BUT OF MY POEM WHY ARE PG U NOT A PART WHY APART why is ur name on my3rd stanza poetry THE THIRD STANZA FRIENDS life will again be as long just remain cool and be strong 1.The third stanza is the most striking one dear poet! Thanks for sharing this valuable write on social awareness with us......10++ 2.A well composed poem. Simply inspiring......10++ 3......human existence will face no extinction......magnificent. THANKS AND BOWS

A wonderful poem! Liked the fascinating expression...10