Friday, March 14, 2008

Lotus Comments

Rating: 4.2

The lotus blooms in the middle of the pond,
The beauty of pink shades on the white petals,
Makes the swans and birds admire and circle around it,
The green leaves floating on water inspire the painters all around it.
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Jay P Narain
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Mary Gordley 18 March 2008

You are a wonderful writer. Your descriptive poem makes the Lotus sound completely enchanting. I love the ending too, the Lotus spreads it seeds to ensure future beauty will grace the pond. Thanks for sharing a poem so beautiful.

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Safina Leigh Tamerlaine 14 March 2008

Wow, it's not often one finds such a wonderful poem praising such a simple beauty. Well done, your descriptions are beautiful.

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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