Friday, March 16, 2018

Lost You Comments

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O' darling! Look- the sun on your forehead
It smiles with your heart touching smiling,
cannot turn eyes from your hair parting.
White snow is swaying with your face
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MAHTAB BANGALEE
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Edward Kofi Louis 08 March 2020

Footprints of lost love. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 April 2019

White ''snow'' is swaying with your face WOW really WOW lovely expression was delighted to read Kumaramani's comment wonderful poet first on PH UR so lucky

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 November 2018

O' darling! Look- the sun on your forehead It smiles with your heart touching smiling, cannot turn eyes from your hair parting. White snow is swaying with your face All of me are captivated in your loving chin I've lost all my sight, lost wink of touching.....fantastic beginning like a fountain from the top. Thanks for sharing.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 16 March 2018

Mahtab, such a lovely write๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

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