Lost Worlds Comments

The rhyming is ok. It would be interesting to read MORE about the 'civilisation'/civilization, ....BUT it may not be possible, as 'it' DEFIES imagination. bri ;)

My comment 'sent' before I finished! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ; ( How about 'defies'? ? : )

About thia quote, 'An ancient civilisation That devies imagination': Civilisation' 'looks' British; in America we usually use a 'z', not 's'. ;) But I bet you want 'defies'.

'An ancient civilisation That devies imagination' You are the 2nd PH 'New Poet' I've told today to proofread. I particularly proofread my poem several times to catch typos before and after submitting.