Sunday, July 27, 2014

Lost Without You Comments

Rating: 4.5

Sad is my story
sad is my heart
without your being
nothing can fill my Life
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Dalia Darling
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Sossi Khachadourian 21 January 2016

Beautiful lines keep it up and thanks for your comment all the best wishes!

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Khairul Ahsan 29 December 2014

It's beautiful and full of passion. I've really liked it. The last two lines are so nice!

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Fabrizio Frosini 26 December 2014

nice lines.. keep on writing..

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Colonel Muhamad Khalid Khan 24 December 2014

you're like an ocean wild i want to sleep on your chest like a child A beautifully composed love poem.Keep it up Well done Col Muhammad Khalid Khan

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