Tuesday, April 24, 2018

Lost Within My Stranger Comments

Rating: 5.0

This kiss, the simplest of affections, made my world dissolve, only you remained in the
longest moment,

Every kiss dissolves what
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Nell Sheridan
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Dr Antony Theodore 29 December 2018

Your kiss, your touch, your thought, love , experience, will not ask of you, more than you wish to give... very great poem of relationship.... you write from your experiences.. thank u. it is so true. tony

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you for your genuinely kind comments

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Lyn Paul 27 April 2018

A beautiful poem with a captivating title.

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you so glad you enjoyed it.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 April 2018

Dear Jen, such a lovely poem👍👍👍

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Robert Murray Smith 25 April 2018

Welcome. I love the heading. Very imaginative poem. I did enjoy your offering. Look forward to more.+++10 The first line is too long. There a few spelling errors,

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Nell Sheridan 04 January 2019

Thank you your comments were helpful. Thanks

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Jazib Kamalvi 24 April 2018

Write comment. Great imagination, Jen. Read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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