Monday, August 3, 2009

Lost What I Never Had Comments

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I am walking alone in the street
with thousand thoughts in my mind
the thoughts about my aspirations, my needs n my life
the heart craves for every good thing
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sherry hiss
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sherry, very well written.gr8 job!

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Subroto Chatterjee 05 August 2009

(1) Contradictions...which is normal with us humans. (2) Still trying to find something you never had? ? ! ! (3) I'd rather that you find that LOST SMILE....even a fake one (temporarily) will do....! ! (4) After that, you'll discover you always had a genuine smile, which you keep on misplacing every minute. (5) Let me know the end result. Cheers. Subroto

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