Thursday, September 22, 2011

Lost Voyage Comments

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I am the unsolved Triangle
You erased me from your solutions
I raised to be a problem
Gambling me, every one wabbles
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Talal Athar
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Malaya Roses 24 September 2011

Sadness within this poem made me wonder such mature feeling in your teenage age. Sometimes love could hurts you till you could not describe the agony and the pain within your heart. Sometimes we might be wonder why we cry and love might giving a best way to heal but in this voyage, what ever left behind shall not coming back unless big we are ready to have a big turn and stop. Well done and very beautiful poem! ! ! !

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