Saturday, July 5, 2014

Lost Tomorrow Comments

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Likelihood of life lies beyond us in unkempt dreams, wet and
moistened by our tears of contempt.

Sombre attitudes stretched beyond capacity, forfeiting all
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RoseAnn V. Shawiak
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Amitava Sur 07 July 2014

very poignant but a bare truth of the miserable life what we mostly lead. Appreciate the truth you said through ... Losing battles every day, forsaking each other for mundane rules and uncoordinated efforts of fools. .... very true.

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Roseann Shawiak 05 February 2018

Thank you, Amitava for recognizing the truth in this poem, you are very astute, your focus and insight are impeccable most of the time. Enjoy reading your poetry because of it!

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Amitava Sur 07 July 2014

very poignant but a bare truth of the miserable life what we mostly lead. Appreciate the truth you said through ... Losing battles every day, forsaking each other for mundane rules and uncoordinated efforts of fools. .... very true.

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RoseAnn V. Shawiak

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