Lost To The Wind Comments

to MyPoemList.............of course. bri :)

I'M BACK! ! ! somehow i remembered to return. must be i was thinking of whose poems i am entertained by/enjoy/AND like to make fun of! ! ! feckless! ? you expect me to consult a dictionary! ? rivulets and trees? are you 'saying' you have arrived in the winter of your existence/life? you HAVE! you may as well give it all up! ! Long enough to be found worthy by some god.......really, Ms. Colon, i don't believe you spelled out what is was you were seeking with your 'feckless and garbled' prayers. was it a place in Heaven/heaven? and just what may be the rules Of a game won only by the most cunning, ? ? if you got on my knees (YOUR knees, that is) MORE OFTEN, you might receive love! or at least a 'little lovin'! you could also try praying where there IS NO WIND! !

I fear not one reached its destination - .................... are you SURE YOU WERE on BOTH KNEES? ! ! ! I just ran out of time; i'll try to remember to return to finish reading and commenting. in the meantime, practice praying! practice makes perfect someone (an idiot?) said. bri :)