Friday, July 6, 2007

Lost To Lust Comments

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Thoughts of you, how my temperature rises
Your body next to mine so divine
Your touch electric upon my skin
Lost in the lust of our connection.
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Alison Smith
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Steven S 28 August 2009

Write more poems like this... the world needs these kind of poems! Excellent.

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Samson Ogbeewi 26 June 2022

Hi, If you love that you'll definitely love this: Lost In Lust (My secret sin) by Samson Ogbeewi

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Kelly Curiel-bowser 10 September 2008

I really like that one. It is respectful in the body's desires adn feelings adn is not crude at all.

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Woooooooooooooooosh! ...Id say more, but, i think you just 86'd one of my P.C. wires...Yup, melted & smoldering...Hot Stuff, You! FjR

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William Jackson 06 July 2007

Fine poem. Music to men's ears everywhere! Nice write! Whitman got it right! 'I sing the body electric! ' Warmest regards, William

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Alison Smith

Alison Smith

Orange, New South Wales, Australia
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