Monday, August 28, 2006

Lost To Apathy Comments

Rating: 4.5

Lost to apathy
drowning in your presence
And I have no idea
Of what's good for me
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Gabriella Franco
COMMENTS
Leo Lopes 28 August 2006

I think this is my favourite out of the new poems of yours ay but hold on... let me read them all and then decide ;) i like ur flow in this one..... Bueno! ! !

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Kelly Allen Vinal 28 August 2006

I very much enjoyed this, Gabriella

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Chris Mendros 28 August 2006

Strangely beautiful. Uneven tempo suggests confusion, ending conveys hope in spite of it all.

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