Lost Time Comments

Of no doubt, this is a true story. Like Jim said, there are things and happenings which are part of the universe, but cannot be explained at present. Clearly told, concise, in-depth picture of a mystery. One that I am sorry upset you and your son. Great write! ! xxElysabeth

Mysteries like this shake our understanding of this world, life, the universe to the core. There is no convincing explanation out there for such events yet. A local warping in the flow of time - or something more sinister? A masterly poetic recounting of events Linda. jim

This is excellently composed, Linda. I agree... hope it didn't happen... you unfold the story, with its question, so the reader can see the history and visualise your son. Well done. t x

linda...hope it dint happen! ...nice story in a well penned poem...love...nalini

Masterfully written.The pace, unfolding of the story, the metre....everything is superbly done! !

So nicely written poem... Love it!