Tuesday, March 30, 2010

Lost Things Comments

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Where does it all go?
The tears, the fears, the beers?
The lies, the ties, the tries?
Where does it all go?
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Alyce Crow
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Leslie Ching 30 March 2010

Interesting choice of rhythm and rhyme, but very effective - nice flow and very suitable conclusion. Indeed, where will we go after we die? I guess we'll never know until it happens! ; P -Leslie-

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