Lost Step Comments

Don't know much about poetry.I am surprised you tried.The first four lines breaks my heart, the more i read the more it hurts.we love you no matter what and hope my prayers be answered at last.

Lost step I want to find More memories I want to bind More dreams I want to mind.......it is so nice that you bring in God at the end.... God is the one who can guide and turn your ways and heal the false steps and make you live and love again.... very nice thoughts dear poetess. tony