Lost Souls Unite Comments

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Fine diction! touchy verses! Ammmmmazing poem! 10+

''Roses do this love shame Is this magic or just a dream Two stars shine this night'' excellent lyric poem, I believe you...............10

I have just edited it, and added on to it ^_^ hope you enjoy ^_^

interesting craft written in heart touching verses...you are two souls united and doesn't care if you are lost forever....But, you have faith that your love can defeat demons? ? ? ...then, i could say that your love is heavenly and won't be lost......forever...10+++++