...^^lost Souls^^.... Comments

Very lyrical - self pity - -- The past peers at me Through the brittle glass of every window Strange sensations curl themselves Up against my insides --- Good vision-

Very passionate writing.....10

excellent imagery...most vivid and full of forceful emotions...and what a splendid last few lines...excellent poem!

Excellant job. Wonderfull theme.

beautiful.................

A very capturing read...Lovely poem indeed!

I stopped at four different lines convinced that this is where it has peaked to an excellence but I had to go on and realized that its magnificent all the way