Tuesday, December 2, 2008

Lost Souls Comments

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James finds his way through dark icy roads
Deep in his thoughts of long lost happiness
Two years on the streets, his birthday approaches
Soon to be fifteen on a lonely Christmas Day
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SPC Kellaway
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Sid John Gardner. 06 December 2008

Dont blame James, Blame the Ghoul in the doorway and the two derelicts in the hostel doorway.Its the world inherited from the previous generation that preached that 'Self Reliance' and 'There is no such thing as society' is the only creed.The 'Rest' can go to the wall.Also de-skilling the labour force, destruction of manufacturibg industry and the deliberate degradation of science and technology in this country has given birth to the society you see today in the good old UK. Great free writing Sam.Very well constructed and poignant. Best wishes, Sid.

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