Monday, November 14, 2005

Lost Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Jane had no tattoos,
No piercings,
And was colored like the leaves around her,
So she blended in,
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Richard Stilwell
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Eila Mahima Jaipaul 14 November 2005

even the lost can be found if you search for them. It is only time and perhaps distance that would bar such an endeavor.... haunting and beautiful poem Rick... -Eila

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***** ********* 14 November 2005

Hi Richard, You make me realise we are all responsible for eachothers lost souls. These lines really hit home. 'And was colored like the leaves around her, So she blended in, ' I don't know if it is a tribute because of the date, but if it is, it is a fine one with a profound message to all. 10 from Tai

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