Friday, December 1, 2017

Lost Soul Comments

Rating: 4.8

My train of thought is heading to an unknown tomorrow
My body is puzzled, I wonder, what to do?
My soul is lost in a maze of questions*
I drift around in trepidation seeking answers
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hiba Gamera
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amanda 01 April 2018

nice work little one, you've got a great imagination. keep going

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Chinedu Dike 09 February 2018

Deep feelings expressed with a wonderful command of the language. Well conceived and elegantly penned. Thanks for sharing Hiba.

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aicha 23 January 2018

such a great poem whith deep words, thank you

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Jazib Kamalvi 23 January 2018

A refined poetic imagination, Hiba G. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 01 December 2017

Such an interesting write, Hiba👍👍👍

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Hiba Gamera 01 December 2017

you think so? ? thank you very much

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