Sometimes i feel like i'm lost
She makes me feel like i'm in a fog
The way her eyes peirce my soul
It makes me feel lost and loved
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Angel? Any reference to me? no just kidding. i love the way it's short and sweet.
To be quite honest it has a lot of potential write slow though think about it before you post it. Maybe try writing it out on paper and having someone proofread it before you post it. I expect more of the same sort of things. Lilith