Sunday, May 23, 2010

Lost Soul Comments

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Sometimes i feel like i'm lost
She makes me feel like i'm in a fog
The way her eyes peirce my soul
It makes me feel lost and loved
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Kristopher DeLander
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Sara Perry 23 May 2010

To be quite honest it has a lot of potential write slow though think about it before you post it. Maybe try writing it out on paper and having someone proofread it before you post it. I expect more of the same sort of things. Lilith

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Angel Magdalene 23 May 2010

Angel? Any reference to me? no just kidding. i love the way it's short and sweet.

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Sara Perry 23 May 2010

very good i think it has a lot of meaning to it

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Kristopher DeLander

Kristopher DeLander

Seattle, Wa.
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