Thursday, November 27, 2008

Lost Soul Comments

Rating: 5.0

Pierced my heart
Rhymes thus I wrote
Love and loneliness
On the tide of thoughts tho float
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Asif Baloch
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Great poem my friend as I never such imagery and creativity like this...thank you 10/10

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Yaseen Anwer 12 December 2008

Hey bro u r amazing matured stroke by pen with wonderful contruction.. Regards Yaseen Anwer

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Gargi Saha 09 December 2008

A wonderful poem. u get 10++..............

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Naru Kaede 09 December 2008

Wow, wonderful Aijaz.. Always in sadness... But keep in happy, but what God plans it's never known, This writes, just remembered me of something, Love this one, my dear friends, Wish happy in you, always, Naru Kaede,

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Omar Ali Sabar 08 December 2008

What you have acclomplished is a wonderful poem sir...10/10

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Egi David Perdana 30 November 2008

dramatic rain with raindropp memories

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Seema Chowdhury 29 November 2008

good wordings....but as always i will terll you not to call yourself a lost soul. just know its a passing phase that will go away soon............ trust me. and always know when you think from your heart you will never fail. hearts always leads you to your destintion.

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Reshma Ramesh 29 November 2008

hmmmmmmm good write......

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 November 2008

Bhayya! I can mimpathize ur pain. I know how bad feeling it is. Ur poems are enamouring with then depth and sincerity of expression..........10(too less)

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Dr Kamran Haider 28 November 2008

Dear Brother, you are in transition of losing yourself and will regain it soon... This is what is a pre-requisite in the process of reincarnation of our lost souls... Beautifully written with sincerity of words and thought... Thanks for sharing...

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Little Hatila ;) 28 November 2008

'I’m the one they call Miserable, lost soul ' love it, it was nice to read it...well done...10 Hataw

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 28 November 2008

Your lost soul will be taken care of by the Angels of Guardian my friend Asif.What a lovely piece from you bro.

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Seema Aarella 27 November 2008

misery of the lost soul brought out very well....a timeless write!

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*Trusting You* 27 November 2008

He might, put the time on hold great line... and a amazing ending! ! ! ! ! I really like it. good job. Becca

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Mohammed Albalushi 27 November 2008

wonderfull writing full of feelings of lost soul

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Gargi Saha 27 November 2008

A wonderful poem.................

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Sandra Fowler 27 November 2008

Your mood fades into the mist like the falling leaves. The cry of a lost soul can never be forgotten. very poignant.. Kind regards, Sandra

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Ben Gieske 27 November 2008

Powerful, good mix of images and feelings.

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Sarwar Chowdhury 27 November 2008

Neat and clean thought out! 'tide of thoughts' - beautiful! I asked my 'Beauty' about your this poem. she said, 'I am in pain'. :) 10++

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Anjali Sinha 27 November 2008

'I never have accomplished Anything in this life' Can anyone believe this? You are one of the best here on PH and u say that. whatever, a lovely write with tons of rhyming words. I lovvvvvvvvvved ittttttt 100/10 sounds funny na but I dont know how to rate it then Superb ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! is all I say regards anjali.

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