Pierced my heart
Rhymes thus I wrote
Love and loneliness
On the tide of thoughts tho float
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Hey bro u r amazing matured stroke by pen with wonderful contruction.. Regards Yaseen Anwer
Wow, wonderful Aijaz.. Always in sadness... But keep in happy, but what God plans it's never known, This writes, just remembered me of something, Love this one, my dear friends, Wish happy in you, always, Naru Kaede,
What you have acclomplished is a wonderful poem sir...10/10
good wordings....but as always i will terll you not to call yourself a lost soul. just know its a passing phase that will go away soon............ trust me. and always know when you think from your heart you will never fail. hearts always leads you to your destintion.
Bhayya! I can mimpathize ur pain. I know how bad feeling it is. Ur poems are enamouring with then depth and sincerity of expression..........10(too less)
Dear Brother, you are in transition of losing yourself and will regain it soon... This is what is a pre-requisite in the process of reincarnation of our lost souls... Beautifully written with sincerity of words and thought... Thanks for sharing...
'I’m the one they call Miserable, lost soul ' love it, it was nice to read it...well done...10 Hataw
Your lost soul will be taken care of by the Angels of Guardian my friend Asif.What a lovely piece from you bro.
misery of the lost soul brought out very well....a timeless write!
He might, put the time on hold great line... and a amazing ending! ! ! ! ! I really like it. good job. Becca
Your mood fades into the mist like the falling leaves. The cry of a lost soul can never be forgotten. very poignant.. Kind regards, Sandra
Neat and clean thought out! 'tide of thoughts' - beautiful! I asked my 'Beauty' about your this poem. she said, 'I am in pain'. :) 10++
'I never have accomplished Anything in this life' Can anyone believe this? You are one of the best here on PH and u say that. whatever, a lovely write with tons of rhyming words. I lovvvvvvvvvved ittttttt 100/10 sounds funny na but I dont know how to rate it then Superb ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! is all I say regards anjali.
Great poem my friend as I never such imagery and creativity like this...thank you 10/10