Wednesday, January 27, 2016

Lost Somewhere Comments

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With a picture in my hand,
I am looking for a youth,
insane in love,
deaf and dumb,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Valsa George 01 February 2016

How different you look Akhtarji..... but as a young boy you don't look a naughty, restless one. There is a look of innocence. I don't see any wild dreams in those eyes. The face in the picture, I feel is that of a very obedient boy.... a darling of his parents! More than the poem, I love the picture!

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Akhtar Jawad 01 February 2016

The picture was taken when I was not lost, the boy you see was lost for ever and could not be seen anywhere.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 27 January 2016

youth is that fountain which must one day dry no matter how much one may try youth does die but in form aging skin and balding hair but the heart within remains youthful till aging is anage passed dream youth remains with in what a youth we all have enjoyed reading our past in your lovely verse tis as if yesterday we were in youth now 'tis worse left in memories as in these youthful verse let youth be the comma of our like not a coma where youthful memories die and within our lonely hearts we cry oh youth why did you have to come just to pass by

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Kelly Kurt 27 January 2016

It is amazing how quickly youth seems to pass. To see the young of today waste theirs is sad.

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M Asim Nehal 27 January 2016

And I think I know the whereabouts of this missing young chap, He has grown up now and has gained wisdom enough to defeat his past. Awesome Poem Janab...........Nicely thought...10+++

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