Tuesday, April 9, 2019

Lost Self Comments

Rating: 5.0

Umpteen times he saw his face
Spotless, clean and clear
Now when he stands before the mirror
To his surprise! Here are so many scratches
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M. Asim Nehal
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Indira Renganathan 18 April 2019

Sometimes mirror also looses its clarity in course of time ' Now time stands between them Mocking and joking, When everything is lost in the dusky sky., ....thought provoking poem 10++ thank you Asim for sharing such lovely short poems with us...also thanks a lot for all your comments on my poems....God bless you

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Gordon Walter 17 April 2019

Yes wondering what happened and how? Great intriguing poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 April 2019

When everything is lost in the dusky sky, mocking and joking going on. This poem is very thought provoking and brilliantly penned and shared.

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Nadeem Ishaque 11 April 2019

Mirrors are flat. Depth of image in a mirror is an illusion. And where do the scratches belong? Is it the lost self or the lost perception of self? Well written, meditative piece of writing!

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 April 2019

Dusky sky! ! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

A wonderful poem full of profound thoughts, Asim ji.......A 100

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

To see a clear and beautiful face in the mirror that does not mock or joke, just remain your beautiful inner Self -the Soul of sublime nature, of beauty and purity.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

When you look at the mirror with a clear mind of pure thoughts, you see a beautiful face without any blemishes.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 10 April 2019

They say a mirror is a reflection of not just your mind but your soul as well. The scratches appear when the mind is clogged and confused with negative thoughts.

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Kostas Lagos 09 April 2019

Congratulations my friend! This poem is excellent!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 April 2019

This is a great philosophical poem having touching expression with insightful theme. Thanks for sharing dear Asim.

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Flower Prince 09 April 2019

Wow! Wow! Hi darling Asim poet, a lovely poem you have written. Dusky sky is mocking and joking. Thanks! This deserves 10 darling.

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