Sunday, November 14, 2010

Lost School Days Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

You and I joined the school on the same day
It was beginning of journey in half senses of life.
Talking endlessly, building castle for life.
Fun, play and mischief’s were as usual as of childhood
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Jinal Oswal 08 February 2012

Wow, it is real sweet... Childhood memories with bittersweet love.

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Ibrahym Oba 01 July 2011

You are great poet, you flashes the memory of the living.But are you not married? I pray you find her.You can read my poem named Eternal love.

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Narayanan Ramakrishnan 08 February 2011

very nice one. it took me back to the mid seventies, when i too experienced all these. now wrinkles are slowly encroaching and, so too, most probably, on that face and skin which i yearn to see.

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Seema Chowdhury 31 January 2011

wow, a nice one. life is a sweet bitter experience of memories and realities and leaves behind a nostalgic memory that haunts us for long.

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Kevin Carney 19 December 2010

Very nicely written, you tell such a bittersweet story. We have our memories that we reach back to and hold on to them. You tell it so well with words that flow and most can relate so well.Thank You for sharing. Great write 10

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Unwritten Soul 01 December 2010

Living back to the past memories make us to taste back what was happen few years back, missed and sweet memories... and time make it changed, but the feeling stained irremovable, i love the way u sway the story and words gently....it is like wind hush a great solace tale...keep writing, thanks for inviting and sharing with us about your sweetness, school in memories...

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Kelli Williams 30 November 2010

This is a very beautiful poem. It brings back the memories of your high school love. Really sweet.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 November 2010

Your place is still vacant at the bottom of my heart.... nice o rememeber pleasant school day and it's memory.....10

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Audrey Heller 26 November 2010

Thank you, for your invitation to read, your poem. How it brings back, memories, I imagine to a lot of people. Who, hasn't gone though first love? That's the one, we never forget, as it was just that, our first love! I think most of us, deep inside, wonder, what became of them and which direction, did life take them. In our own way, we hope they found, what they were looking for and have made a life for themselves. I'm sure, they think of us too, in the same manor. A very lovely write and very nostalgic! Audrey Heller

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Redd Juceekittee 25 November 2010

If something or someone is meant for you, it will happen.

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Jenny Gordon 20 November 2010

Very sweet....bittersweet. I so love this piece...it is my favourite! I am sorry it had to end so sadly. I love how you depicted it all.

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Hans Vr 20 November 2010

ice memory, written well. interesting read

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Seema Chowdhury 15 November 2010

nostalgic memories always carry sweet and bitter remembrance. i hope and wish your wish is granted. and you get to meet your high school friend at least once.don't give up. just hang in there. take care

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Naida Nepascua Supnet 15 November 2010

a very nice reminder of younger days, young love and happy school days. very nice.

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