Monday, July 18, 2016

Lost Relationship Comments

Rating: 4.5

When you get the answers that you seek
You wish that the illusion of what you want
Was more than just another hopeless dream
A realisation that the destiny you see
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Joseph Harlacher 19 July 2016

i just set my goals so complex that i know all the time i won't get done and always remember what caused the self to want the relationship.

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Chinedu Dike 18 July 2016

An insightful depiction of disappointment and distress occasioned by exit of blissful love ❤, well articulated and nicely penned in good diction with conviction. Thanks for sharing Ally.

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Kelly Kurt 18 July 2016

An emotional and relatable poem, Ally. Thanks

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Ally White

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