Lost Paradise Comments

a heart felt rendering of the pain of swat the loss of a paradise that we witnessed as live events unfolded, burning torture bombings killings, you name it it was decades back when i fist went there and then many times... lovely balanced and spontaneous lines that depict the anguish amply i too penned a poem on swat.... in fact my second longest poem is dedicated to swat and a second one touches swat too will send you links.... blessings

aww its so full of emotion and a little of anger! gr8 write.

An excellent write with a lovely depiction. Keep penning :)

two humble suggestions: dwelling instead of dwell and The never failing brooks and smiling springs,

You have wonderfully sketched Sawat. A place that will not let you go once you visit it. And the people are so nice and soft hearted. This is a serious question. To whom I blame, Soldiers of the god…..? Or soldiers of Land Let hail the shedding blood Your words are poetical and you know poetry. Gifted dear Jahanzeb

wonderful imagery well written great use of words loved it :)

I enjoyed reading your poem! It's a wonderful piece

Great write, so beautifully written with wonderful imagery, inspired write!

A beautiful poem written in old English