Monday, December 16, 2019

Lost Overnight In The Woods Comments

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The horizon garrottes the twilight's throat. I sleepwalk
through slash and over deadfall. My arms, white canes,
antenna me through copses; touching tree-trunks,
legs of huge tenebrios, whose abdomens
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John Beaton
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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 13 December 2018

Woah extraordinary impressive diction employed to relate the episode, but I found the imagery, sights and sounds very interesting and poetic the way you describe them. Kudos. pleez do comment/review my newest poem too, titled, Dream Holiday places

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 01 December 2018

your poetry is too technical for an ordinary natural Canadien poet like me but your lonesome adventures intrigue me what nights of loneliness though forests I can see I walked in the jungles of Vietnam stark naked ripped clothes actually so I can imagine your plight and which has resulted in such a delight Hope you will scan some of mine the first top ones moms smiles o Canadien poet

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