I seem to have lost my way,
At this time when I'm turning gray.
Can some one take me home, by the way?
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@Cassandra Jasmine Thanks for your appreciative words. Thanks for the generous 10. Am glad you liked it.
@Mary Forrester Thanks for the kind words and the generous 10. Am inspired.
@Shama T. Bukhari Thank you so much for reading my poem. Thanks for the comment. Much obliged for the kind words.
@All those readers who made a comment below: With great surprise I have noticed that some one has disliked all my comments I made in response to my readers' ones. Curious to know who this well wisher could be!
@Howard 'the motivational poet' Simon Thanks for your appreciative words. Your comments always inspire me!
@Erika Wingo Thanks for your thoughtful comments on my poem. Much appreciated.
@Valsa George, Thanks for your prudent interpretation and kind appreciation of my poem. I am truly inspired by your comment.
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@Marie Shine, I just cannot thank you enough for your kind words. I am so glad that you have interpreted my poem correctly. Your prose is as beautiful as your poetry, Marie. THANK YOU.
@soulful heart Thanks for sharing your thoughts on my poem. I am truly inspired.
@Geetha Jayakumar, Thank you for your kind remarks on my poem. Very much appreciated.
@Aqua Flower Thanks a lot for the kind words. Same here too, I always enjoy reading your poems, which are based on reality. Thanks for the generous 10/10.
@Elena Plotkin, Thanks a lot for your appreciative comment on my poem. And of course for the 10++ you so generously gave me. I'll read some of yours soon!
@Sandra Feldman, You've really moved me, by your appreciative words, on my poem. With the circumstances prevailing all around, home and abroad, I feel totally lost at times. You have rightly caught the mood, I am so keen to find my way! I cannot adequately reciprocate your appreciative words. You are kind and generous. Thanks for the 10/10.
Beautifully penned down.. You know how to play with words... Keep up the good work.. You are a great poet!
Acknowledgement of being lost is sometimes the birthplace of greatness. well done my friend!
Ooh, I really like this poem! It reaches out and jolts through you like a bolt of lightning, making your mind turn to thoughts one would usually rather not think. Raw, honest, and deep.
Beutiful poem! I really enjoyed it a 10 from me! :)
Thank you @Goldheart Bird, for reading my poem and rating it so generously! I've just read your poem - 'Books' and left my comment there.