Lost my vision
Eyes blinded by light
Lost my vision
Deafened by noise
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A great poem. I liked the precise comment of esteemed poet Glen. Top score.
Hey, Richard! We need reminders, restoration, yes? And blessed be he gives them. May we live continually in a restored state. -Glen
It's a unique poem! The last two lines are powerful! Thanks for sharing....10
Thank you, Dillip. I wanted to make those lines so powerful because I believe in One God. I sincerely believe that that could be the beginning of the end to religious wars.
Richard, I don't share your faith so there is nothing to restore, but your joy in it shines through here. With its clever repettion this reads as a mantra for believers.
THX so much, Dillip for revisiting this poem and adding it to your favourutes!