Lost My Vision Poem by Richard Wlodarski

Lost My Vision

Rating: 5.0


Lost my vision
Eyes blinded by light
Lost my vision
Deafened by noise
Lost my vision
Mouth so tasteless
Lost my vision
Heart so damn cold
Lost my vision
So long ago

Restored vision
With One God's Love

Wednesday, February 7, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: god,love,visionary
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard Wlodarski 23 December 2022

THX so much, Dillip for revisiting this poem and adding it to your favourutes!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 December 2022

A great poem. I liked the precise comment of esteemed poet Glen. Top score.

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Glen Kappy 20 February 2018

Hey, Richard! We need reminders, restoration, yes? And blessed be he gives them. May we live continually in a restored state. -Glen

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Richard Wlodarski 23 February 2018

Glen, thank you so much for your spiritual response.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 09 February 2018

It's a unique poem! The last two lines are powerful! Thanks for sharing....10

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Richard Wlodarski 10 February 2018

Thank you, Dillip. I wanted to make those lines so powerful because I believe in One God. I sincerely believe that that could be the beginning of the end to religious wars.

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Judith Blatherwick 07 February 2018

Richard, I don't share your faith so there is nothing to restore, but your joy in it shines through here. With its clever repettion this reads as a mantra for believers.

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Richard Wlodarski 10 February 2018

Thank you, Judith. You insightfully picked up on the mantra!

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