Lost my vision
Eyes blinded by light
Lost my vision
Deafened by noise
Lost my vision
Mouth so tasteless
Lost my vision
Heart so damn cold
Lost my vision
So long ago
Restored vision
With One God's Love
A great poem. I liked the precise comment of esteemed poet Glen. Top score.
Hey, Richard! We need reminders, restoration, yes? And blessed be he gives them. May we live continually in a restored state. -Glen
It's a unique poem! The last two lines are powerful! Thanks for sharing....10
Thank you, Dillip. I wanted to make those lines so powerful because I believe in One God. I sincerely believe that that could be the beginning of the end to religious wars.
Richard, I don't share your faith so there is nothing to restore, but your joy in it shines through here. With its clever repettion this reads as a mantra for believers.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
THX so much, Dillip for revisiting this poem and adding it to your favourutes!