Sunday, March 8, 2009

Lost My Poems Comments

Rating: 5.0

Somewhere in the night a child cries,
A Losing soul someone weeps and someone dies.
No Wear to be found in the night, humanity hides.
Somewhere in the night, a soul screams, not mistakin a thing
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christian guice
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humanity hides as always! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Catrina Heart 18 March 2009

Nice poetic description crafted with fine rhymes/diction...repeatition of phrase were nicely put up...meaningful poem...10+++

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