Monday, April 18, 2016

Lost Music Comments

Rating: 5.0

I never heard a song till you
came down to lay with me
and all of life I thought was mute,
the flowers in the park
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Barry Middleton
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Nosheen Irfan 19 April 2016

A lovely n poignant poem on love and loss. Beautiful imagery to express the intensity of feelings.

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Barry Middleton 19 April 2016

Thank you Nosheen. So glad you like it.

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Dimitrios Galanis 18 April 2016

The metaphors used appropriate.

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Barry Middleton 18 April 2016

Thanks Dimitrios. I am still posting old work.

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Norah Tunney 18 April 2016

I feel the deep loss and beauty of this love poem especially the last verse It strikes a cord. It's the human condition all of us at some stage can relate to loss Loss of a loved one, a lover or a sense of the alive presence which some call God Thank you Barry for this I have a poem on ph Living Ghost which expresses the sudden withdrawal of a lover (very painful) which I experienced last year if you care to read it sometime

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Barry Middleton 18 April 2016

Thanks Norah. Yes, I wrote this about 30 years ago and I'm still not over it.

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