Lost memories I seek to find
In dusty caverns of my mind -
To travel those abraded trails
Then lift those misty tattered veils
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your poems are well-knit compositions, this one is a shared experience, going deep down the memory lane...
Wow, thank you Valerie! I love our poems, they always succeed in taking me away to a different place, as an excellent poem should!
do we lose the memories, or do they lose us.... this one strikes home!
Sometimes I find poetry that is so fine that I cannot wait to read the next one! I shall read more of yours with greatest pleasure. Constance Yost
A most delicious read my eyes were lucky to meet, poorly my tongue spoke million thanks, my hands clapped with greatest happiness, yet never enough to say that's how much I loved this gorgeous poem! Thank you!
Such beauty in your words Val, I am reading this beautiful poem with my mouth wide open. If I could give you a 20 I surely would.
If I may borrow a line from Jackson Browne to describe this one; The dreams are rolling down across the places in my mind and I've just had a taste of something fine A True Masterpiece, suitable for framing...
Beautiful and dear, hopefully eternity will remember this one. :)
Wonderful poem. I love it. Congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours, Gajanan Mishra
Spectacular write. The mechanics are impeccable and the message flowing with emotion.
Hauntingly beautiful with a classical style. Would not this move the hardest of hearts-so precious
No need to try a comment on this. When a truly great poem comes along, you know it, you feel it. So true here.