Wednesday, May 16, 2012

Lost Memories Comments

Rating: 5.0

Lost memories I seek to find
In dusty caverns of my mind -
To travel those abraded trails
Then lift those misty tattered veils
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Valerie Dohren
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Joseph Anderson 17 June 2012

No need to try a comment on this. When a truly great poem comes along, you know it, you feel it. So true here.

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Shahzia Batool 02 June 2012

your poems are well-knit compositions, this one is a shared experience, going deep down the memory lane...

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Vincent Kuo 22 May 2012

Wow, thank you Valerie! I love our poems, they always succeed in taking me away to a different place, as an excellent poem should!

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Eric Cockrell 22 May 2012

do we lose the memories, or do they lose us.... this one strikes home!

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Constance K Yost 19 May 2012

Sometimes I find poetry that is so fine that I cannot wait to read the next one! I shall read more of yours with greatest pleasure. Constance Yost

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Erik Eriksen 18 May 2012

Great poem, like the way this is written, floats beautifully.

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Elena Sandu 17 May 2012

A most delicious read my eyes were lucky to meet, poorly my tongue spoke million thanks, my hands clapped with greatest happiness, yet never enough to say that's how much I loved this gorgeous poem! Thank you!

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Juan Olivarez 17 May 2012

Such beauty in your words Val, I am reading this beautiful poem with my mouth wide open. If I could give you a 20 I surely would.

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G.R. Gaus 17 May 2012

If I may borrow a line from Jackson Browne to describe this one; The dreams are rolling down across the places in my mind and I've just had a taste of something fine A True Masterpiece, suitable for framing...

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Patti Masterman 16 May 2012

Beautiful and dear, hopefully eternity will remember this one. :)

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Godfrey Morris 16 May 2012

You have great flow, control of words. Great Poem. Great Poet

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Gajanan Mishra 16 May 2012

Wonderful poem. I love it. Congratulation. I invite you to read my poem and comment. Yours, Gajanan Mishra

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Captain Cur 16 May 2012

Spectacular write. The mechanics are impeccable and the message flowing with emotion.

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Joseph Anderson 16 May 2012

Hauntingly beautiful with a classical style. Would not this move the hardest of hearts-so precious

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Heather Wilson 16 May 2012

A lovely poem Val, so many memories, such a wonderful read.

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