Lost Manhood Comments

This is a very good poem as are your others. I do think poetry broken into lines is more likely to be read. This, of course, is only my opinion.Your work is good poetry without question.

Usually people on here try to write prose and make it look like poetry. This writer trys to write poetry and make it look like prose. In the case of poetry it really doesn't matter. He does a fine job too. I recommend this because it is clear in meaning. and meaningful to purpose. Two good things. GW62

Wow! Amazing deep and powerful. Quite a life you've had but to be able to write such beauty from all that pain is inspiring. Thanks!