The dark blue sky
Hung over the east
Was beginning to have,
The cool orange feast,
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You created such a wonderful backdropp for your poem and life goes on every day, even though one is in pain... beautiful imagery. Excellent. Karin Anderson
Lost lover still had not lost his courage...fine metaphor write..10 Ency Bearis
The night was over! This night was in eyes New sun shines bright A lost lover fights! I think love is actually known to us, when we lose it... George Bernard Shaw said... 'There are two tragedies in life, one is not to get your heart’s desire and the other one is to get it…” I was lost in the imagery of your poem for a while, beautiful indeed… Thanks a lot for sharing this lovely poem of yours…
The dark blue sky Hung over the east Was beginning to have, The cool orange feast, ------- A unique way of opening verse, great imagery used, so poetical. Crafted with brilliance...a 10/10
This too shall pass.......and morning shall come after this night! your poetry appears to say!
beautiful.............this one is really........beautiful.......well penned