Wednesday, April 11, 2012

Lost Love (Love Love Love Love Love Love) Comments

Rating: 4.5

Void, empty, hollow inside
My dreams have fled, my hopes have died
Existence has no reason
Life's just passing with each season
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Udiah (witness to Yah)
COMMENTS
Anna Montgomery 10 April 2024

I love how you put light into the darkness inside this poem. I write usually darker poetry, but I believe that there is light in the darkness and you exposed that in your poem. I understand your pain. I live it frequently.

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Olga Tinina 05 April 2024

Любовь подарок Божественный, И кто её познал, был избранным! , а если сохранил её , прожил не зря! Любовь мир и созидание! ! Без неё холдно и тоскливо!

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Chris Christian 11 April 2023

love this peice, been there myself

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Rising back from a heart-shearing loss is not easy. This poem exudes positive energy, in spite of such loss. Great. Well done.

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Dr. Antony Theodore 04 March 2021

I weep all night for my love gone My heart is sick, for death I long Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost I'll mourn always for the great cost.. Grand me wisdom to see the truths and to go on facing all that may come in my life. tony

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Srushti Dodamani 16 August 2020

Awesome.....🤗🤗🤗 thanks for sharing

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Srushti Dodamani 16 August 2020

Awesome.....🤗🤗🤗 thanks for sharing

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Ravi Panamanna 06 February 2020

You say that existence has no reason and request the Lord to grant you wisdom. Unless we are positive, no Lord is going to grant us any wisdom. Our attitude counts and nothing more than that. For better attitude, we should have better perceptions. For this, we should have a clear mind of things.Contemplation is what we really need. All the great revelations are born only out of contemplation and meditation.

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Henrik Somogyi 15 May 2019

In a very plastic way you describe what it means to lose love. Congrats.

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Tom Jones 07 November 2018

Absolute rubbish.Repetitive writing with no rhyme or reason.

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Caroline 17 July 2018

Remarkable piece....truly loved it

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Lerato 06 July 2018

its a great poem but touching.....but ey it rocks love it

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Leela chatterjee 16 June 2018

When his love is gone, he finds himself in the grip of hopelessness and despair.

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Magret 28 May 2018

Fascinating, heart touching poem.It gives a meaning to life, that when you in love you share common dreams and when love is lost everything you had interest in seize to exist.

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Samadullah 23 May 2018

Wonderful

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Sylvaonyema Uba 17 April 2018

Good rhyme scheme and Good use of quatrain. With a musical effect. SylvaOnyema Uba

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Rae Seagull 02 April 2018

What a touching poem. Loved it

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allah 28 May 2018

im the poem and your mom was touching me

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Jaquarius 30 March 2018

It maked me cry

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Stephanie T Castillo 12 March 2018

I wish for love just like that. The pain to wish upon none, yet wish to be loved just like that. What a poem.10 10 10 10 X 10....

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Yawar Narchoor 04 February 2018

this poem has turned me completely speechless lov u man

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