Void, empty, hollow inside
My dreams have fled, my hopes have died
Existence has no reason
Life's just passing with each season
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Любовь подарок Божественный, И кто её познал, был избранным! , а если сохранил её , прожил не зря! Любовь мир и созидание! ! Без неё холдно и тоскливо!
Rising back from a heart-shearing loss is not easy. This poem exudes positive energy, in spite of such loss. Great. Well done.
I weep all night for my love gone My heart is sick, for death I long Mine eyes well tears for love that's lost I'll mourn always for the great cost.. Grand me wisdom to see the truths and to go on facing all that may come in my life. tony
You say that existence has no reason and request the Lord to grant you wisdom. Unless we are positive, no Lord is going to grant us any wisdom. Our attitude counts and nothing more than that. For better attitude, we should have better perceptions. For this, we should have a clear mind of things.Contemplation is what we really need. All the great revelations are born only out of contemplation and meditation.
In a very plastic way you describe what it means to lose love. Congrats.
When his love is gone, he finds himself in the grip of hopelessness and despair.
Fascinating, heart touching poem.It gives a meaning to life, that when you in love you share common dreams and when love is lost everything you had interest in seize to exist.
Good rhyme scheme and Good use of quatrain. With a musical effect. SylvaOnyema Uba
I wish for love just like that. The pain to wish upon none, yet wish to be loved just like that. What a poem.10 10 10 10 X 10....
I love how you put light into the darkness inside this poem. I write usually darker poetry, but I believe that there is light in the darkness and you exposed that in your poem. I understand your pain. I live it frequently.